After the Storm
by mjasr

Comment by Spork99:
I get the idea, but there's too much happening visually in the picture to communicate it clearly. Maybe if one of the fallen trees dominated the frame.

After the Storm
by mjasr

Comment by justesme:
Yes, interesting idea, but does it portray desolation? Just because after a storm, doesnt mean everyone's left the country.

Also, I see the fallen trees, but the numerous living ones still erect totally contradicts and ruins the effect. The bright green leaves also give the picture a 'Alive and well' feeling.

Perhaps a different angle or area of the forrest?

However, well done. Good try. =)

After the Storm
by mjasr

Comment by Faye Pekas:
I think the colors are too bright. nice idea though

After the Storm
by mjasr

Comment by DBoy:
Does not makes me feel desolation.

After the Storm
by mjasr

Comment by barahoo:
Desolation, devoid of comfort, warmth or hope. To me green implies hope, this photo in black and white would have been given a higher score.

After the Storm
by mjasr

Comment by Smeagol:
This photo almost completely displays life rather than desolation...

After the Storm
by mjasr

Comment by amsmyth:
this year has been so lush with all the rain that it is hard to find desolate and empty space

a²+b²=c²
by mjasr

Comment by NatalieFord:
Heh - that formula is for a right angled TRIANGLE. ;-)

a²+b²=c²
by mjasr

Comment by tarique:
how does your title apply here?
Where is the hypotenuse?

a²+b²=c²
by mjasr

Comment by faidoi:
Overexposed. Too much light going into your camera. Tone down on ISO, exposure rating, or outdoor mode. I wished that the composition was straighter. I like the dark column near the right side adds a little depth.