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by ButterflyGirl

Comment by mstone:
Looks like you had a good subject for the challenge. It doesnt look like you really took the time to compose the shot though. I dont like that you cant see the guys face. It takes away from what the image could say to the viewer IMO.
It's overexposed, but that can be adjusted with some PP work.
You should have gone up to talk to the guy, talked to him a bit and then taken some great shots.

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Comment by crabappl3:
Capture the face and convert to black and white and you have a strong picture. As it is with the high sun, the subject looking away, we can almost feel his pain, but there is too much left for us to try and figure out.

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Comment by quiche:
Great title

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Comment by Shutter-For-Hire:
Nice shot, try it in Black and white with some contrast, also try and get one with him looking in the direction of the camera so we can see his face

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Comment by Judi:
Good work. I so wanted to be able to capture this man's photo. Lucky girl!

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by ButterflyGirl

Comment by tamatama:
Wow, great timing!

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Comment by Rolly:
I would like to be able to see the black feathers. You have caught the subject well though, well done.

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by ButterflyGirl

Comment by Purple_Girl:
This is cute, I like the vibrant colours. The shot would've benefited from having the cards on a different surface, I think.

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Comment by Jedusi:
That's one big mean looking bird !

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Comment by snaffles:
cool bird, what is it? Apart from a reptile-eating bird? A little more saturation as grass looks washy.