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Comment by rinac:
Strange but interesting. I'm intrigued by the person sitting outside left of frame. You must have left them there for a reason, I'm just trying to figure out why....

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Comment by Chez:
Terrible, sorry but it is.

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Comment by boyd2000:
I think you either forgot the "s" after produce or missed a ":" after Yoga. For a clear bright mind I would hope for a clear, bright picture without fog and all the distractions in the sand. The horizon may be intentionally crooked, but it takes away from the strong, capable phrase. This has a lot of potential, but with the above issues I can't vote it highly. Now with her in the same pose on a sunny day without stuff in the sand I'd rate it much higher.

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Comment by DistantColours:
The model's pose is excellent, the location is excellent and they fit the message.

Unfortunately the clothes on the beach are a distraction and the image looks flat.

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Comment by nutzito:
Lacks focus and contrast. The elements on the left side do not add to the composition and make it look as a snapshot. Sorry

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Comment by Scapeshots:
i don't know about this...if your trying to convey a clear bright mind...wouldn't you want the picture to be clear as well?

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Comment by donenright:
I suggest the phrasing is too banal to be motivational- it's more of a commercial message. Secondly, why use a hazy shot to illustrate the "clear, bright" idea?

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Comment by Melethia:
A little oversharpened - the grasses have lots of zigzags and a bit of haloing around them which is indicative of too much sharpening.

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Comment by Atropos:
Wayyyyyy oversharpened. Also, the whole photo looks dull and there is nothing interesting to look at.

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Comment by JeffDay:
colors seem flat, not alot going for me visually