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| 10/02/2004 07:17:25 PM |
Summer Daysby dan_pendletonComment by rich: The focus on the girls seems a little soft, although that may have been on purpose. The bench is a little bit distracting, it pulls me away from the subject a bit. I do like the image, though. |
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| 10/02/2004 04:14:58 PM |
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| 10/02/2004 03:34:12 PM |
Summer Daysby dan_pendletonComment by DougPaz: I am assuming that you used fill in flash to capture the details on her face, and yet it doesn't seem to be on the trees. Looks great though. I feel as if I am peering into a dream on childhood, a very emotive shot. Good job. |
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| 10/02/2004 02:50:55 PM |
Summer Daysby dan_pendletonComment by xtabintun: A pretty good photo, but it just doesn't appeal to me. There's a bunch of stuff in the grass too, I don't know what it is. 6 |
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| 10/02/2004 06:10:56 AM |
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| 10/02/2004 05:42:54 AM |
Summer Daysby dan_pendletonComment by Konador: This is a very nice candid shot, and the soft focus works very well. I do think it's a little bit too centered, and if youy took it a little bit sooner or later the girls would make a more interesting composition. I'm not keen on the bush on the left of the frame either. 7 |
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| 10/02/2004 02:58:08 AM |
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| 10/01/2004 11:44:45 PM |
Summer Daysby dan_pendletonComment by librodo: I like the candidness of this picture. Good use of the plants and shadow as a natural frame. My very minor coment for improvement is the formation of the two girls..it is a bit in-line. It is a very good picture though. |
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| 10/01/2004 09:07:25 PM |
Summer Daysby dan_pendletonComment by autool: Wonderful subjects, I can hear them as I look. I feel your picture could have been much stronger if they were off set from one another. Not so lined up vertically. To see both shadows completely would have been super for me. 6 |
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| 10/01/2004 08:22:21 PM |
Summer Daysby dan_pendletonComment by bpickard: I can see you have introduced some framing to the pic but not sure that it is enough or all-round. I understand the positioning of the foreground child because of the shadow but the one in the background (or the seat) doesn't help the balance. |
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