Inocencia
by enriqueavila

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Composition: The composition is good. The child is not centered yet she is not pushed to the sides of the frame either. There is some interest around her in the frame yet it does not distract.

Technical: I think B&W was a good choice as the colours of the clothing would have been a distration from the child who is your central topic. The B&W conversion seems ok but feels a little flat, perhaps a bit more contrast. If you could have got the childs face into the shot I feel your score would have increased as we could have felt a connection with her.

Feel: I rated this one above the score it finally received. While the multiple light sources is not obvious it worked on a couple of levels: a straight lighting shot but also using the analogy of the child "lighting" the parents life. Being a parent I can relate to that sentiment.

If you have an comments feel free to PM me, good luck in future challenges.

Inocencia
by enriqueavila

Comment by kittiekat:
preciosa su foto!.
hermosos momento!
luv.!!!

Inocencia
by enriqueavila

Comment by enriqueavila:
Just want to say thanks to all the ppl who voted and viewed this photograph. I really appreciate your comments and critics. thanks really

Inocencia
by enriqueavila

Comment by posthumous:
great capture and composition. 9

Inocencia
by enriqueavila

Comment by SarahCJ:
How adorable, almost naked but in a pile of clothes!

Inocencia
by enriqueavila

Comment by Simpa:
She is superbe... love this presentation...

Inocencia
by enriqueavila

Comment by Rainbow-Coloured-Soul:
Very cute!

Inocencia
by enriqueavila

Comment by SandyP:
Awwwwww. . .that is PRECIOUS! What a sweet moment you have captured!

Inocencia
by enriqueavila

Comment by FairyWings:
Cute!

Poorly Rich
by enriqueavila

Comment by lauraodom:
Meets Challenge - 2
Lighting/Processing - 2
Composition - 1
Overall Impression - 1
"WOW" factor - 0
Score: 6