Unwritten; I Can't Put This Into Words
by kasmmask

Comment by hideout:
Interesting concept, but very dark image.

Unwritten; I Can't Put This Into Words
by kasmmask

Comment by Greetmir:
I like it ... 8

Unwritten; I Can't Put This Into Words
by kasmmask

Comment by 100Proof:
You started at the beginning because it's not written yet, am i right? I'm pretty sure that's what you are trying to get across...

Unwritten; I Can't Put This Into Words
by kasmmask

Comment by vdbe:
dark

Unwritten; I Can't Put This Into Words
by kasmmask

Comment by jjusa:
underexposed

Unwritten; I Can't Put This Into Words
by kasmmask

Comment by digidori:
Very clever. Didn't I see those hands earlier in the challenge?

Unwritten; I Can't Put This Into Words
by kasmmask

Comment by Tygerr:
The tone is off. There are no real highlights in the photo. If you'd increased the exposure, or increased the strength of the lighting you would have gotten far more contrast that would have made the photo more appealing, rather than dark and drab.

Unwritten; I Can't Put This Into Words
by kasmmask

Comment by glad2badad:
Something doesn't quite fit telling this story...maybe it's the pencil being back at the beginning of the sentence on the paper? The proper writing position of the hand? The lighting comes across as dark, emotive, broody (is that a word?). Perhaps if the pencil was broken and splintered with the hand nearby clenched in a fist? I'm wondering also about the area in the upper left. Haven't decided if it's right, wrong, or indifferent. All I know is I've noticed it and it pulls the eye out of the center of the frame.

All of the above is JMO of course. :D Best of luck to you in the challenge.

Unwritten; I Can't Put This Into Words
by kasmmask

Comment by alifeinexile:
really creative :D

Unwritten; I Can't Put This Into Words
by kasmmask

Comment by Evaan:
Clever idea, and nicely lit. 6