Can You See Me Now?
by ofaw

Comment by psart:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Critique by psart:

Wonderful Shot !!!

Composition:

I love the way you framed this image. Positioning of the trees in relation to fawn size is right on. Framing is exactly what I would of done in this instance. Any closer and tree trunks would of distracted from subject. So well done on composition.

Focus:

Focus is alittle bit soft on fawn do to camera lens capturing grass in front of subject but it still works here since a softer image brings out the helplessness of fawn. Great job.

Lighting:

Lighting is alittle harse on trees in highlights, but I stress only alittle. Image still should of scored higher in my opinion.

Overall:

A high scoring image I would of rated you between a 7-8 on this submission. Keep up the good work and you'll make the top placement in the near future. You have a good eye for total image capture and it will eventually pay off.

Dennis (psart) if you have any questions PM me

Can You See Me Now?
by ofaw

Comment by tdevoe:
very nice

Can You See Me Now?
by ofaw

Comment by stargazer05766:
I can see you..
Love it..

Red Canyon in the Snow
by ofaw

Comment by BrianR:
Good blend of tones through this photo...

Red Canyon in the Snow
by ofaw

Comment by chele:
beautiful scene. nice capture!

Coiled
by ofaw

Comment by pineapple:
...and ready to strike. Pretty in situ photo. 8.

Coiled
by ofaw

Comment by ladyhawk22:
Nice detail on this snake! I hope you didn't have to get to close!!

Coiled
by ofaw

Comment by geekssweet:
I like the subtleness of this. Your subject almost blends in perfectly with the ground cover.
Nice focus. I also like the fact you have your subject off center but not to the point of obscurity.

Coiled
by ofaw

Comment by mamba:
good composition and subject choice.

Coiled
by ofaw

Comment by rosiehall:
great shot