Sherpet - Sweet and Refreshing
by Sheryll

Comment by Melethia:
Bonus points for doing one of the sweetest users!

Sherpet - Sweet and Refreshing
by Sheryll

Comment by riversong:
Sweet!!!!! What a nice tribute to a wonderful lady. Who would have thought the name was out there?

Nice.

Sherpet - Sweet and Refreshing
by Sheryll

Comment by Charlene:
How perfect is this? VERY appropriate :)

Sherpet - Sweet and Refreshing
by Sheryll

Comment by Nathanael_G:
Clever, but a little messy in my very un-expert opinion; there's just a little too much going on for my taste.

Sherpet - Sweet and Refreshing
by Sheryll

Comment by dbarnho:
Very well presented.

Sherpet - Sweet and Refreshing
by Sheryll

Comment by ergates:
Looking at the box, I'm not sure I would eat that ;) To improve the picture I think I would look out a bit for the background, perhaps taking the picture a bit more from above? Other than that a good capture and nice idea from the user name.

Color - Refractions of light
by Sheryll

Comment by saracat:
Interesting effect.

Devine Puppy Love
by Sheryll

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Nice focus and you captured great colors in both animals.

Lighting: I'll have to agree with Efergoh and pacpinto on this one. The lighting is a bit too harsh. I think that your flash needed to be toned down a little. That white on the big dog's face seems just a bit too hot for my liking.

Composition/Content: The hand seems a bit out of place and even awkward. I know that this was probably the best way to capture what you were after, but maybe shooting the animals interacting at ground level would have helped.

My Opinion: I think that the voter's were most tough on your lighting. As soon as the image pops up, the eye was pulled right to the whites and held hostage. Still, cute idea and great animals!

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

Mom edited.jpg
by Sheryll

Comment by WickedB:
Really great job here- for the teeth, I have found that desaturating them just a bit is a really natural looking way to make them look more white.

Devine Puppy Love
by Sheryll

Comment by pacpinto:
Nice puppy. The light is too harsh (direct flash?), the crop isn't square (I really think it should be), but I love your lettering.