My keyboard
by Crafty Sue

Comment by wewillexplore:
Should have made it level and cut out the top left corner - the desk part. Also - why cut off certain keys? Is your keyboard inherently more interesting than the one any of us are at?

Cake
by Crafty Sue

Comment by hawkida:
The cake isn't the focus of the shot - nothing really is. There's little of the cake to be seen from this angle. The lighting is quite pretty but the detail on all the flowers is lost and the ferns look quite messy. The background is not very good at all - I can see a stepladder! I doubt this would ever make it onto a magazine cover.

Cake
by Crafty Sue

Comment by gaja_tz:
composition could be better. in the middle cake looks like overexposed. = 4

Cake
by Crafty Sue

Comment by Musicman:
I think the cake is focused too high for the magazine cover.
Usually the magazine are taller than wider.

Cake
by Crafty Sue

Comment by byetko:
Now if only that chair wasnt in the background...

My keyboard
by Crafty Sue

Comment by EJ:
I suppose ARTart is in there somewhere.

Cake
by Crafty Sue

Comment by mindyparker:
The title would cover the cake! Nice, but the cropping is not good for a magazine cover. Should be portrait not landscape

My keyboard
by Crafty Sue

Comment by alanfreed:
In all honesty, it just doesn't look like much thought was put into this. Sorry to sound harsh... but it's "just a picture of a keyboard." The counterclockwise tilt feels uncomfortable, and the apparent use of flash created over-lit spots in the center of the shot. Again, I hate being harsh in comments, but if I score something low, I generally try to provide an explanation as to why... - 2

RioSamba rose.jpg
by Crafty Sue

Comment by mbardeen:
Hi Sue

This is a very nice shot! I like the yellow of the rose contrasted with the green of the leaves. Also, the composition is very nice, having the diagonal of the plant stem to the right and the circle of the rose to the left creates loads of interest.

Good job!!
-Matt

My keyboard
by Crafty Sue

Comment by jillz:
blurred and overexposed. the angling is distracting.