study of a young woman
by silverfoxx

Comment by John White:
Very artistic 9

study of a young woman
by silverfoxx

Comment by Ivory:
terrific shot, love the subdued tones and the vibrant red feather.

study of a young woman
by silverfoxx

Comment by briantammy:
looks overprocessed but something i might do to give this photo the feeling of a painting.

sweet dreams
by silverfoxx

Comment by ace flyman:
Interesting take on the challenge. 7

sweet dreams
by silverfoxx

Comment by Simms:
ok, I am voting you down for the doll in this one.. the subject is boring, the BW conversion is a bit dull as well.. sorry 4

tyred
by silverfoxx

Comment by talj:
Greetings from the Critique Club Svetlana!

First of all congratulations on your highest scoring image to date :o)

I'd also like to add now that I am by no means an expert with editing, infact I would say I am just a beginner so this is going to be quite hard for me to critique this image!

Composition:

I really like the idea you have here and he overall composition you have created here with the two images is good. The only thing that is slightly out of place,imho, is (as one of your commenters has said) that the tyre is at an angle and the 'model' is in a more upright position which makes it slightly unrealistic.

Technicals:

As I have said above I can't really comment on your editing steps. All I feel I can do is point out a few things that I can see that 'bug' me. First of all the editing marks (?) around the top of the middle tyre are very distracting and secondly the hair from the model on the outside of the tyre looks completely unreal to me.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)

sweet dreams
by silverfoxx

Comment by 99Percent:
Impressive, but unfortunately it doesn't fit the challenge criteria for me.

sweet dreams
by silverfoxx

Comment by Marc923:
Interesting take on the challenge. Well lit, nice and sharp, but not really working for me.

sweet dreams
by silverfoxx

Comment by smardaz:
looks like a Tool video...had to stop and stare, love the creepiness of this! 9

sweet dreams
by silverfoxx

Comment by debitipton:
Quick! She need and aspirin