"71 Pine Tree Lane"
by ladpupmoe

Comment by karmat:
Did you try adding some saturation or adjusting the contrast? This shot seems a little flat to me, though it is lit well.

The Sparrow
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Gracious:
Critique Club COmments by Grayce
This image meets the challenge with lines that lead directly to the subject. I like how the lines are under and above the bird, and echo each other.
The contrast is quite good and leaves no doubt as to the subject. The bird stands out nicely.
Unfortunately the eyes aren't visible. They are the most important aspect. Always try to focus on the eyes. IF the rest is a little fuzzy, so what! As long as you can see the eyes.
I'm sure you had to do this real quickly, before it flew away.
I like how the head is cocked. It shows expression and movement.
Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
Good luck in all your photographic endeavors!
Regards,
Grayce

Grayce

Old Bridge
by ladpupmoe

Comment by EJ:
You were right to emphasis the Architectual features. Nice.

"71 Pine Tree Lane"
by ladpupmoe

Comment by muckpond:
I don't see the numbers?

Old Bridge
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Silver Fox:
Charming old bridge, good colour in the concrete work, but would it not have been possilbe to back up and show more bridge and less ground work/bushes? Show more bridge and more of the river and top of the bridge and arches looking down to the river?

Old Bridge
by ladpupmoe

Comment by lennier:
Lots of pixel noise. Try shooting in a lower ISO. 4.

Old Bridge
by ladpupmoe

Comment by peggy:
Over exposed? Out of focus.

Old Bridge
by ladpupmoe

Comment by PixelatedVisions:
The composition and the angle of the bridge, I like. I like how it mirrors the hills in the back.

"71 Pine Tree Lane"
by ladpupmoe

Comment by clues56:
Ooops. Where's the naturally ocurring number? Is on there that I don't see?
I would like to see this photo a little sharper.

Old Bridge
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Chuckie:
good photo, i like the idea.