"Yummy"
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Chilly0999:
Cute photo, but I find it too dark, the cat blends in with the background too much

Me and Gi
by ladpupmoe

Comment by dsidwell:
This is a tender scene, and I love the posing from you and your friend. This intimate scene could use some intimate lighting, too, to enhance the mood further. Nice.

Erupting Paper Clips
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Comment by cpanaioti:
*Critique Club*

General: For impact I would have probable chosen different coloured paperclips. Red is a more prominent colour than the green and yellow chosen.

Composition: You'r almost there with the composition. The tape dispenser adds balance though I think the paperclip dispenser is too central horizontally. A different vantage point would adjust this or just including a bit more to the right.

Exposure: The lighting seems a little flat. A little fill flash may have helped. I think if you just exposed it a little more you would blow out the foreground.

Impact: I don't think the vantage point chosen does justice to the image. Maybe shooting more from below and to the left would help here, keeping the same components within the frame.


Keep shooting.

Colette

Message edited by author 2003-06-19 18:38:23.

Me and Gi
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Gracious:
I think a portrait should reveal some character, or emotion of the model, by showing expression in eyes or other facial features, or body language. Did your picture accomplish that? Yes

artistic/creativity? Ye...interesting perspective

Technical? Fine

Overall? I like this. It shows the warmth of a person/animal relationship/interaction. Good job!

Me and Gi
by ladpupmoe

Comment by HBunch:
focus and clarity are really good, but we can't really see either your face, or Gi's face. The main subject really seems to be your hair. specifically the top of your head. Wish we could see your faces more. I think that would make for a more exciting photo.

Me and Gi
by ladpupmoe

Comment by Dallas_TX:
wonderful image. BOTH subjects are wonderful. well done

"Yummy"
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Comment by Mitonski:
I\'m getting some weird black areas showing up when I view this, but that may be a problem at my end. Technically nice, I\'m just not much of a cat person.

"Yummy"
by ladpupmoe

Comment by eloise:
Are you sure you didn't mean to save this for black on black? :->

Sky & Telescope ~ Eclipse of Sun
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Comment by frisca:
i like the reflection in the end of the lens. Very nice. Wish there was a bit more light though, for some reason it seems a tad too dark, or maybe its just not enough contrast? I'm not sure..I'm struggling to find what my hesitation is here.

"Yummy"
by ladpupmoe

Comment by alanfreed:
Would have been a great choice for the "black on black" challenge, too, eh? Funny expression! :)