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Can you feel the heat ?by migidiComment by inspzil: Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Beautiful colors on this candle. The little marks all leading to the center of the candle really help this one to illustrate how clean the image is. This photo however is basic to the extreme and very simple to execute. This is a pretty clean image like I said earlier, but it really lacks dynamic visual impact. There just isn't a lot here.
Technical - It probably isn't very noteworthy that the flash did not fire. At this range, the flash would've made the whole picture white. You did a good job with the exposure on this one. The framing is okay, but I think I'd have turned this 90 degrees clockwise so that the image was not L/R symmetrical and so that the edge of the candle would've better framed the overall image.
Overall - A simple picture of a simple subject. In all fairness to you, its not a badly taken photo. In fairness to the viewers, there really isn't a whole lot to go with in this photo. You may have tried to put more emphasis on the wax around the candle and not so much on the flame. The dead center approach is generally not looked well upon in most circumstances by any of the "old timers" on the site who are mostly pretty experienced photographers at this point. There are times and places for it though. Good luck in future challenges. I hope this could be of some help to you. - Inspzil |
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