Surf, Sand and Sun
by Jeileen

Comment by rcrawford:
The horizon is tilted just a little to the left and the shadow on the people is distracting, maybe because they are the main subject based on the rule of thirds. If you could have gotten the hot babe in the foreground to pose, and made her the subject this shot wound have been even better. Nice Job.

Surf, Sand and Sun
by Jeileen

Comment by ChrisW123:
This one looks like a 70's post card also, with the coloring and font. Good job!

Surf, Sand and Sun
by Jeileen

Comment by tomzinho:
looks a little grainy/1950's-ish, whether intentional or not i like it (horizon seems a bit off, however)

Yellow Transporter on a Cloudy Day
by Jeileen

Comment by bod:
Well worth reshooting this on a clear day. A blue sky would make a great backdrop and the sun should bring out the yellow nicely. A great concept where the weather has let you down.

Yellow Transporter on a Cloudy Day
by Jeileen

Comment by Nickls:
Mark down for the chromatic abberations. Try removing them in PS.

Surf, Sand and Sun
by Jeileen

Comment by sanandan:
I like the movement in the text and the overall image, I think the text is a little too overpowering for the image. may be a lighter color would help.

groogy day
by Jeileen

Comment by matt betea:
Each shot individually I like. But combined like that almost seems a little distracting.

la Florida Flora
by Jeileen

Comment by ClubJuggle:
*Critique Club*

FIRST IMPRESSION: Bright and colorful, plenty of punch.

CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge

COMPOSITION: Composition is good. I like the inclusion of sky as it adds interest to the photo. You might try cropping tighter at the bottom and left though, and see if you like the results.

TECHNICAL: Exposure is near flawless. As an alternative, a wider aperture (lower number) would shorten the depth of field and help set your subject off from the background.

CONCLUSION: Great, colorful shot. If you have the opportunity you might try reshooting it at various settings and see if you can make it even better!

Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges!

Yellow Transporter on a Cloudy Day
by Jeileen

Comment by robbieh:
Nice color saturation.

groogy day
by Jeileen

Comment by tomzinho:
i think the photos are fine and combined well, but the story being told isn't very clear.