Shadows & Echoesby
hihosilverComment by theSaj: ::: Critique Club ::: [The Saj]
First Impressions: Oh no...not another flower. Oh wait..there's more! :)
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Composition: Composition is good on the foreground (flower & hopper). The biggest issue I see with the composition is the background which is very distracting.
Subject: Subject is of a nice flower could be considered typical. However, the placement of a secondary subject (hopper) makes this entry stand out beyond the normal flower entry.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light): Focus is good. Color and lighting is good. However I feel the image could be brighter and might benefit from an increase in hue saturation, particularly in the green.
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To improve?: Consider a different background. This may seem crazy, but you could hold a white piece of paper behind the flower.
Summary: An interesting capture. I like the shadow of the flower overlooking the hopper. Background is overly distracting.
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It is my hope that these insights are helpful, and constructive. If you have any questions regarding this critique, please feel free to PM me. Also feel free to PM me with any feedback on this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so.
- Jason "The Saj"
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