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Comment by mariomel:
Very well done. I like the artsy look to this picture. There is definitely a story here. Leaves alot to the imagination.

Looking Back
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Comment by Gracious:
Very nicely done. Beautiful job!

Looking Back
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Comment by hockeyfan:
Great picture.
I love the sepia tones.

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Comment by Jacko:
Intersting shot. Makes you wonder what they're talking about. I find the light a bit distracing (top left pane) and the brown squar distracting too. Still a smart shot. Maybe crop out the top two planes. Thanks. Jacko. 7

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Comment by GolferDDS:
My guess is that this is a conversation between a teacher and a student? I like this picture because there is a story here.

Dreams of a Bay Window
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Comment by Kavey:
Critique Club


Initial thoughts
As per my comment below, what I like about this image is the the atmosphere - sad and full of longing. It makes me think of a sad somebody sitting inside a room in the dark looking out of each of these windows.

Composition/ Content
I think the reason for this feeling is the solid black of the interiors that works well for me as well as the simplicity of what’s outside – no spectacular vistas – just every day suburbia.
For this reason I think the gradiated lines separating the three windows look out of place. So I’d prefer this with only a solid black space between each window – it would look almost like a supernatural bay window.
I’d like to see more space above and a little more space below each window– to me the top and bottom of the windows seems to be missing.

Fits The Challenge
I think it does though the image is perhaps more of an emotional communication than a representation of a storyline, to me.

My Opinion On The Photo
Like it!

Looking Back
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Comment by frisca:
nice effect with the telescope sort of tunnel view, though I'm not sure its my favourite thing with that much black around it. I also like your choice of sepia, it goes with the captioning well. :)

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Comment by gowf67:
this is good, creative, i'll bet though it surpasses the creative instincts of most folks..........i like it very much. 8

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Comment by Amiee:
Good idea. I think that this pic however, could have been shot in better lighting conditions. The way this image is taken, it doesnt provide for much interest.

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Comment by jdavis:
Unique!