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mbardeenComment by Kavey: Critique Club
Initial thoughts
Really like the concept – very subtle and thought-provoking.
Composition/ Content
The concept itself is a clever one – and I particularly like how the image itself doesn’t tell us whether you are saying that change is good, bad, inevitable or perhaps none of the above. All it shows us is that many changes have happened in our life times, some major and some minor.
In terms of the image itself, I like the angle of the viewpoint as well as the diagonal of the ipaq within the frame. It̢۪s nice that the diagonal is set against the (almost) horizontal and vertical lines of the reflected calendar.
In my opinion the reflection could be a little brighter, though really not much, because the fact it̢۪s less clear than the ipaq supports the idea that it̢۪s a ghost from the past.
Lighting on the ipaq seems uneven with a lot more around the navigation buttons than elsewhere.
Background
Clean, rich, appropriate.
Fits The Challenge
Definitely.
My Opinion On The Photo
I like the concept and the thoughts this image provokes better than I like the image visually.