Entering Matrix
by Allen

Comment by 'Pong:
I might be too shallow to say this looks more like the webcam shot.

Entering Matrix
by Allen

Comment by roleychiu:
haha

Food
by Allen

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*
This is a good setup. I like the green, orange, and purple you have chosen, and it looks very natural and yummy looking.
The lighting seems to be good on the oranges and lettuce, but the egg plant is creating a bit of a glare.
The focus and clarity are ok, but because of the glare on the eggplant, it seems a bit softer than the oranges and lettuce. I like how we can see the texture in the oranges.
I think I would like to see this with the top section of lettuce cropped. So there is just one bin showing. I like the arrangement. It looks like it was just thrown in there naturally, not set up to be a "still life" kind of shot. Which I think is what makes this shot different.
~Heather~

Entering Matrix
by Allen

Comment by cpanaioti:
Too dark and grainy. It reminds me of the Blair Witch Project rather than the Matrix.

Entering Matrix
by Allen

Comment by sotsot:
Hello?? any body there? I can't see any

Entering Matrix
by Allen

Comment by Chuckie:
the matrix is such a good movie, good reprensentation

Entering Matrix
by Allen

Comment by GreggeN:
I think this shot could have been lit a little better. It's a little grainy, and I don't really see how the shot refers to the title.

But a good idea - I don't mean to be negative about this shot, there's definite potential here.

Food
by Allen

Comment by Chuckie:
nice job i really like the colors

Food
by Allen

Comment by frisca:
I'm not sure what it is about this picture..maybe the arrangement is chaotic without any story to tell? Perhaps if you concentrated on just the eggplant and the green leaves it would be stronger?

Food
by Allen

Comment by jdavis:
The sticker on the orange is distracting. Needs a focal point. Perhaps grouping the elements closer together would achieve this. Good luck.