A screaming comes across the sky.
by 4trtone

Comment by Paul:
I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.

Positives: I don't really understand this image and I enjoy how another part of my brain asks me why I expect to. I do quite like the colour palette too....

Critical stuff: Despite the internal dialogue this image promotes, I'm not a fan - even as an abstract I feel the image isn't effective for me - I think I'd have enjoyed lower contrast and higher saturation.

Overall: A challenging piece of work but not one for me I'm afraid.

A screaming comes across the sky.
by 4trtone

Comment by Alex_Petrini:
The only thing I can see is a blurry shot, noisy and with the green right side that distracts the viewer - it doesn't work IMHO

A screaming comes across the sky.
by 4trtone

Comment by 3DsArcher:
Gravitys Rainbow?

A screaming comes across the sky.
by 4trtone

Comment by posthumous:
intriguing abstract. it really does silently scream.

A screaming comes across the sky.
by 4trtone

Comment by LN13:
noisy, out of focus, no clear subject. If you were going for an artsy abstract, I'm not sure you were even successful at that. It's just a mess.

A screaming comes across the sky.
by 4trtone

Comment by dtremain:
Interesting abstract. Very nice use of color, transitioning from one side to the other. Distorted enough so you can't really figure out what it was originally. Like the motion projectiles on the left side that keep this from being too static.

A screaming comes across the sky.
by 4trtone

Comment by PennyStreet:
a rude interruption to what otherwise would have been a rather normal day out

A screaming comes across the sky.
by 4trtone

Comment by nickyb:
the abstract doesnt really do much for me here...

A screaming comes across the sky.
by 4trtone

Comment by njsabs:
I like this abstract, however it is rather flat. A boost in contrast and saturation would be good.

A screaming comes across the sky.
by 4trtone

Comment by oldbimmercoupe:
such courage! an abstract at dpc! finally some art. 10.