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| 03/30/2003 01:15:48 PM |
Macedonian Saladby pitsamanComment by inspzil: Greetings from the Critique Club
And from your favorite critic too!
By Inspzil :)
Firstly, if you don't like my opinion, don't take it personally. I'll assure you that I'm not overpaid to do this. And because I take this to be somewhat professional, I will do this critique.
Composition - Excellent colors. The arrangement is very good. The bit of water on the olives is a nice touch. The only thing I think that takes away from the overall composition of this photo is the bowl showing on the side and thru the tomatoes and peppers. Otherwise, very well conceived.
Technical - Very well lit and framed. This is a nice crisp image that portrays these vegetables to be very tasty. I think this could be a little crisper, but not much. Very well taken photo.
Overall - Well conceived and executed photo. My only suggestion would have been to push the green pepper in a little tighter toward the center of the frame to show the whole thing. This would in turn cover up some of the bowl that shows between the tomatoes. Aside from that, I think you did well to get the most out of this shot. Good job with this shot and good luck in future challenges. - Inspzil
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| 03/30/2003 01:14:13 PM |
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| 03/28/2003 11:28:38 PM |
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| 03/28/2003 11:13:12 PM |
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| 03/28/2003 03:20:58 PM |
Self portrait 7by pitsamanComment by pitsaman: Originally posted by jmsetzler: A 'critique' is nothing more than the opinion of the viewer. If you can't take opinion on your photographs, I would suggest that you NOT check the box requesting a CC critique when you submit your photos. |
I'm not a member of "Critique club" because my profile says that I'm Photographer amateur and i will not pretend other like some other people do! |
| 03/28/2003 03:15:18 PM |
Self portrait 7by pitsamanComment by pitsaman: Originally posted by jmsetzler: A 'critique' is nothing more than the opinion of the viewer. If you can't take opinion on your photographs, I would suggest that you NOT check the box requesting a CC critique when you submit your photos. |
I will take opinion as long is unbiased and professional in matter,all other will be challenged accordingly! |
| 03/28/2003 02:23:59 PM |
Self portrait 7by pitsamanComment by jmsetzler: A 'critique' is nothing more than the opinion of the viewer. If you can't take opinion on your photographs, I would suggest that you NOT check the box requesting a CC critique when you submit your photos. |
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| 03/28/2003 01:12:29 PM |
Self portrait 7by pitsamanComment by pitsaman: Originally posted by Inspzil: Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - With all due respect, I don't think this sort of image belongs in the challenges. This is total snapshot material. It does meet the challenge, and it is a cute picture to some degree, but it is not challenge material. The composition is cluttered. It doesn't really have any flow to it. There is a subject, but it isn't really that interesting. The shadow from the flash on her arm is very distracting. More creative lighting would've been preferred or bounce flash so it wasn't so darn bright.
Technical - Pretty well focused and not badly framed. The flash was not the optimum lighting for this situation. The DOF is pretty good actually. I like the face not being in total focus. GOod job there. Doesn't look like any processing was truly needed or done.
Overall - I think the score pretty much reflects my thoughts about this image. This is a better picture for your scrapbook than an attempt to win a ribbon. It needed more setup to get only what you wanted in the photo. Good luck in future challenges - Inspzil |
Doesn't belong into challenge!(FROM ABOVE)
What a bunch of baloney and bullshit,thanks for a comment anyway and keep your weird tastes for yourself! |
| 03/28/2003 05:34:32 AM |
Self portrait 7by pitsamanComment by inspzil: Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - With all due respect, I don't think this sort of image belongs in the challenges. This is total snapshot material. It does meet the challenge, and it is a cute picture to some degree, but it is not challenge material. The composition is cluttered. It doesn't really have any flow to it. There is a subject, but it isn't really that interesting. The shadow from the flash on her arm is very distracting. More creative lighting would've been preferred or bounce flash so it wasn't so darn bright.
Technical - Pretty well focused and not badly framed. The flash was not the optimum lighting for this situation. The DOF is pretty good actually. I like the face not being in total focus. GOod job there. Doesn't look like any processing was truly needed or done.
Overall - I think the score pretty much reflects my thoughts about this image. This is a better picture for your scrapbook than an attempt to win a ribbon. It needed more setup to get only what you wanted in the photo. Good luck in future challenges - Inspzil |
| 03/27/2003 11:37:38 PM |
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