Marching Columnsby
MusicmanComment by Lustre: Critique Club
Composition: The subject is very nice, but you took the photo from slightly off-centre. You probably should have taken it from head on, or way off-centre (making it look deliberate). The result is a slanted horizon line (especially obvious across the bottom) - which a lot of people vote harshly. Other than that, the framing is very good and well balanced and the piece of blue sky adds nicely to the subject.
Technical Quality: The exposure is great - the sky looks wonderful. The sharpening is spot on - not over sharp, nor soft. Focus is crisp. As mentioned though - the horizon is crooked which has cost you dearly.
Meeting Challenge: There's plenty of obvious symmetry in this photo, so no problems with meeting the challenge.
Creativity: I like the building and the small spots of yellow really got me thinking. Did you saturate the image to achieve this, or is that the natural colour balance of the building? (No problem - just curious)
Border / Title: No border - none required. The title is pretty good, but I didn't understand the "Marching" part - perhaps because of my nationality.
Overall: It's a very good image minus the crookedness aspect. You could even try a rotate in an image editing program - although it won't quite fix it. Well done though.