Mandy
by griz210

Comment by dwterry:
She's pretty and all, but... see how the light on her sleeve is brighter than the light on her face? It draws the attention away from her face. Also, her sleeve appears as if it could be in sharper focus than her eyes. The eyes are critical for getting the portrait right. If this was made with available light, I'd probably darken the sleeve in post processing, and lighten the face, especially the eyes and teeth. If you had supplemental lighting available, it would have been better to get the exposure closer in camera.

Weathered but still standing
by griz210

Comment by strategicthinker:
ok

Weathered but still standing
by griz210

Comment by candlerain:
IMO, too busy

seasons greetings
by griz210

Comment by levyj413:
Pretty literal on the artwork there ...

seasons greetings
by griz210

Comment by Gauti:
does not appeal to me at all.

Weathered but still standing
by griz210

Comment by jseligman:
A little too busy, but I still like it.

Weathered but still standing
by griz210

Comment by Prime_Time:
a little s curve would cure ur contrast and it even help ur sharpness problem, also cropping off the pole to the right

12 days of xmas
by griz210

Comment by xXxscarletxXx:
Could use a lil more clarity

Weathered but still standing
by griz210

Comment by ilwil:
focus is a little off

seasons greetings
by griz210

Comment by BrianR:
And to you too...