The Window to the Outside
by Hoochie

Comment by RUEDISCHMUTZ:
You have a pattern, but something is still not exiting. Work on composition

The Window to the Outside
by Hoochie

Comment by katswig:
Too dark.

The Window to the Outside
by Hoochie

Comment by Jumoon:
lovely picture, could possibly need to isolate the pattern more.

The Window to the Outside
by Hoochie

Comment by shamer:
Nice fish-scale effect.

The Window to the Outside
by Hoochie

Comment by tstout:
a version without the larger cross-pieces would have been much more interesting!

The Window to the Outside
by Hoochie

Comment by lovethelight:
The top right corner is pretty dark, maybe a tighter crop would bring more focus to the pattern. Great colors.

The Window to the Outside
by Hoochie

Comment by JeffryZ:
The brown section of the wall is a distraction for me. I think it may work better ninety degrees counter clockwise.

Yahtzee Spots
by Hoochie

Comment by levyj413:
Nice composition - good use of the shapes. The lighting's pretty flat, though. The white dice are quite gray, just about matching the gray background for the page. Try enhancing the contrast and see what you think. That should also help get rid of the distracting texture of the background.

Pure white and bright green on absolute black, and this would do much better.

Yahtzee Spots
by Hoochie

Comment by sherpet:
Plenty of spots here.

Yahtzee Spots
by Hoochie

Comment by SandyP:
This is a very well done dice shot! It looks so 3-dimensional. I think I may have liked them all to be white - but that is soooo just a matter of personal taste and not a reflection on the photography! Nice job!!