Redelicious
by Ubersteiny

Comment by ricokim:
Nice photo. I would have prefered the lighting on the face to be a little more subtle but all in all a good picture.

Hey Mr. D.J
by Ubersteiny

Comment by CrazyStripesss:
Love it =]]. seriously, this is one of my favorites. i can't even explain why i like it... it just stood out for me. 9

Hey Mr. D.J
by Ubersteiny

Comment by glad2badad:
I'm sorry, but what connection does this have with 'School Days'? I like the silhouette approach and the use of backlighting to highlight the bg is good, although if she were a little farther in front you'd have less light spillover on her shoulders, fingers, and cheek. An ironed background would help keep the viewer from being distracted. All JMO of course. :D Good luck in the challenge.

Bubbles
by Ubersteiny

Comment by lynnmarie:
This is cool! The colors look really great, and you posed her with a very nice and natural expression.

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by Ubersteiny

Comment by Jutilda:
Nice! I might crop out some of the right and lower area so he's a bit more to the right of the shot.

Hey Mr. D.J
by Ubersteiny

Comment by nutzito:
I hate to pointout the problem with the wrinkled backdrop (6)

Hey Mr. D.J
by Ubersteiny

Comment by aerogurl:
With advanced editing this could be a ribbon winner. I love the backlighting, the yellow sheet, etc.. but the eye goes immediately to the wrinkles and lines of the sheet. IMHO If you darken the subject, add more saturation of the yellow and remove the wrinkles, you have an awesome image that will definitely make a nice addition to your portfolio. 7

Darci-Alley2
by Ubersteiny

Comment by bs-photos:
Neat angle, very pretty girl.

Hey Mr. D.J
by Ubersteiny

Comment by digitalknight:
wrinkles are pretty distracting

Hey Mr. D.J
by Ubersteiny

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
I just wanted to let you know that I really like the idea of this picture, your set up was good in theory but some of the imperfections are going to kill your score. The sheet that you used has wrinkles in it, as if you didn't know right. One of my first pictures I ever submitted had the same problem and I didn't think that I would get hit as hard as I did for it so I know that you have more than enough comments saying something about the sheet. Anyway I didn't deduct anything for that because I know what it's like to have something like this. Good luck on the voting. (8)