Kids-web.jpg
by onar

Comment by bassbone:
you picked a wonderful time for a walkabout - the light is glorious in every shot. i like how you have captured the boys - completely free and unaware of you.

web.jpg
by onar

Comment by bassbone:
i really like the rich golds, the sharpness of the thorns and the smoothness of the background

Flowerweb.jpg
by onar

Comment by bassbone:
Fabulous colors and textures - the backlighting makes this feel as if it is aflame - darn nice background as well.

DSC_3186.jpg
by onar

Comment by HighNooner:
rich deep beautiful colors

blur2.jpg
by onar

Comment by JerseyGenie:
Next shot ... beer pong table? I love the colors and the perspective (AND THE HUMOR TOO).

blur2.jpg
by onar

Comment by jmritz:
Bottling plant? Nice perspective. Pretty green bottles...:)

A lovely branch
by onar

Comment by parallax:
Nice shot. Good score.
Well done Antoni

A lovely branch
by onar

Comment by imagesbytlp:
Excellent score Onar...I really like this! T.

blur2.jpg
by onar

Comment by annig:
well, that's one way to get us to see it blurry! Now let me have your keys before you continue any further!! LOL :)

Reflections
by onar

Comment by DrAchoo:
Technicals: you control the lighting well. We have some details in the rock and the bright isn't blown. I think the composition may need some tweaking (see below). Focus is on.

The feel: I want to crop this tighter. I like the natural frame the rock provides, but I do not like the large expanse of rock on the left. I think you would do better with about half of it. A closer crop will also provide more real estate for your model who is somewhat small in this shot.

The game: I think you had a good idea here. Meets the challenge well and is creative with a bit of "wow". Some work on the perspective and cropping might have gotten this one closer to 6.