Before the Bloom
by starrlite

Comment by De Sousa:
The composition is too centered, without dinamic. Colours are weak. Good focus, but it can be better. Read the manual of your camera and turn of the date and time.

Before the Bloom
by starrlite

Comment by theyetifanclub:
The time stamp adds effect, it makes it seem even more like a ONE

Before the Bloom
by starrlite

Comment by lifternessjt:
Try to remouve the date stamp in your camera settings. I find this is too much of a distraction.

Before the Bloom
by starrlite

Comment by jfwolpert:
take off your date stamp

Before the Bloom
by starrlite

Comment by LERtastic:
um.... yea, gotta get that date and time off of there...

Before the Bloom
by starrlite

Comment by quiche:
Needs better lighting, better focus. Turn off time stamp in camera, or at least crop it out.

Before the Bloom
by starrlite

Comment by cislander:
Date and Time? Very distracting.

Before the Bloom
by starrlite

Comment by gpalos:
too simple just like point & shoot.3

Before the Bloom
by starrlite

Comment by LN13:
Tip...turn off the date/time stamp on your camera

To be brutally honest, this shot is fairly mundane, and will probably hold little interest for most. Perhaps a shot from the side, with other green plants in the background and a shallow depth of field would be more captivating. Also think about bumpin the saturation and sharpening somewhat.

Before the Bloom
by starrlite

Comment by m2iw:
OMG. please turn the date/time function off.