Lord of the Flies
by jaysonmc

Comment by Tiberius:
not really. however technically better then the other lords 5

Sun-Spots-and-Rays
by jaysonmc

Comment by Melethia:
Just the right balance!

Lord of the Flies
by jaysonmc

Comment by tnun:
a bit young, but enchanting. the early stages of the book perhaps. 6

Lord of the Flies
by jaysonmc

Comment by lunachicken:
A curious take on an oft violent story. They almost seem too innocent, though I guess the story starts innocent in a way. I would like it a tad darker and more black toned only because of the dark overtones in the book. 6

Lord of the Flies
by jaysonmc

Comment by tvsometime:
They seem a bit younger than I remember but otherwise it captures a mood of unsupervised activity in the woods, which fits. Visually the image is well executed and composed. The light is wonderfully captured.

Lord of the Flies
by jaysonmc

Comment by emoons:
I don't really get Lord of the Flies from this, but I am sure it was fun photographing your kids (I assume they are yours).

There are aspects of the photo that I like such as the light and shadows in the foreground, but the background is a little too white for me. I would like to see more contrast.

Gave it a 4

Lord of the Flies
by jaysonmc

Comment by Denielle:
Nice black and white...
I do like the detail, and the composition...
I gave it a 5

Lord of the Flies
by jaysonmc

Comment by Bear_Music:
This is actually quite troubling... Absent the title reference, I'd just see a couple of de-pantsed youngsters running around a tree, but you had to bring THAT up, and now every time I look at it, I'm seeing darker things. So it's effective in that regard, and nicely constructed as well. For me, I'd have expected something more overtly *savage*, face paint and defiant stares, but you took a different path and it's quite effective.

8 from me.

Lord of the Flies
by jaysonmc

Comment by Tiny:
Nothing to do with the title (boys are way too young for one thing) and has no atmosphere.5.

Lord of the Flies
by jaysonmc

Comment by mariuca:
A cute picture of two lovely boys playing in a rather peaceful forest, shoehorned for the challenge
5