Childhood Friends
by OneSweetSin

Comment by dacrazyrn:
little larger aperture and slower shutter to get more detail on the outside trains, and maybe a bit different angle so as not to see the ending area

Childhood Friends
by OneSweetSin

Comment by CreativeFlyPhoto:
very cute subject matter ... and very strong leading lines :)

Lost Trust
by OneSweetSin

Comment by tcherring:
CRITIQUE CLUB

Challenge: Definitely meets the challenge. I think it would have been a little more compelling with a tear or maybe more jagged writing. Your writing looks so beautiful and "happy", not desperate. (that's a backwards compliment)

Technique: I love the angle and the cropping. The corner at the top is cropped, but the bottom is not, so it is a bit too off-centered. The black and white finish is great. This is a little blurry, which probably happened during resizing. You might want to sharpen your image before submitting next time.

Overall: A creative and good approach to this challenge. I'm sure many of us can relate to the despair of losing trust in a loved one. Thanks for sharing this wonderful image with all of us!

Intensified Jelly Eggs
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Crafty Sue:
different but pretty

Intensified Jelly Eggs
by OneSweetSin

Comment by jmsetzler:
interesting work with the post processing... - setzler

Intensified Jelly Eggs
by OneSweetSin

Comment by vtruan:
very intense.

Intensified Jelly Eggs
by OneSweetSin

Comment by leko2k:
interesting shot. I didn't particularily like the post-processing you did on it though. It went a bit over the top and that hurt your score from me unfortunately.

Intensified Jelly Eggs
by OneSweetSin

Comment by GinaRothfels:
I can't help feeling this would have looked better with a black background.

Intensified Jelly Eggs
by OneSweetSin

Comment by john22132:
where is the egg? Those are jelly beans?

Childhood Friends
by OneSweetSin

Comment by kandyj:
Good use of challenge theme. Might have liked it better if all were in focus.