The December Kittenby
OneSweetSinComment by Artyste: Welcome from the Critique Club
Initial Thoughts
Cute photo, but the kitten seems a little distressed. The packaging is also a bit too chaotic, at first glance.
Composition / Content
The composition seems a little bit off to me. The wrappings of the open gift kind of overpower the kitten, and the bulk seems to be too far to the left, where I think a horizontal centering would have looked much stronger here. A kitten in a box for December is pretty cliche, so works well for a "calender"
Background
The black background doesn't really work well here to me. Seems too cold and uninviting.
Camera Work - Technical
Great focus and DOF, but the exposure is a little bright. Some harsh highlights on the kitten, and bits of the wrapping. Foil is notoriously hard to expose for, of course, but your light source seems a little too bright.
Digital Processing
From what you've put down as digital processing, I can't see any glaring problems. A good use of USM, as the image doesn't seem too over-sharp, and I can't tell where you've cloned or smudged.
Fits the Challenge
I think this image definitely fits the challenge. It's a good tie-in to the month, and has a decent cliche that would fit in a calender of this type. A more, "holiday" type background would have helped, or even a plain white bg.
My Opinion on the Photo
It's a good subject for a calender, but a few things turned me off about the photo itself. The kitten looks distressed, the background is harsh and doesn't really belong, and the whole thing is a little over-exposed. I'd have also worked on getting a different perspective to work with a more horizontally centered crop. Good Luck with future submissions.