These are MINE!
by OneSweetSin

Comment by jmsetzler:
i enjoyed my Tonka trucks too... until they all got stolen :( I left them in the yard and never saw them again... Hi Isaac :)

Dandelion Wine
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Fiver:
Cool Idea. I might have uped the saturation so the flower is brighter.

Dandelion Wine
by OneSweetSin

Comment by frisca:
I would have liked more saturation on the dandelion. :)

Dandelion Wine
by OneSweetSin

Comment by sagestudio:
I like the DOF on this one, could use a bit more saturation for my taste. Good job!

Dandelion Wine
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Amiee:
Nice image, but the colors are a bit dull and the image is out of focus at the bottom and this distracts the eye.

Dandelion Wine
by OneSweetSin

Comment by jdavis:
Good depth

Penn State Altoona
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Gallatin:
Very nice postcard shot

Keepin the Rails Going
by OneSweetSin

Comment by ClubJuggle:
*Critique Club*

FIRST IMPRESSION: great exposure, sepia was a good choice, but the tilt bothers me.

CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge.

COMPOSITION: I feel the composition for this shot would have been stronger if the shot were level (as it is, it feels like the wheels should be rolling off to the left).

TECHNICAL: Exposure is good, but a shallow depth of field would have made the junk in the background less of a distraction. The sepia was an excellent choice for this photograph.

CONCLUSION: A good, solid entry and an interesting subject, well captured.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges!

Message edited by author 2003-05-10 10:25:00.

Penn State Altoona
by OneSweetSin

Comment by kiwiness:
A very typical postcard shot. I like the pastel colors of the trees on the shore line. A polarizer filter might have brought those colors and the sky out a lot more, but otherwise a photo you can be proud of.

Penn State Altoona
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Crafty Sue:
like the texture on the water good color