Home and view
by Mona

Comment by ursula:
FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB

Hello, Mona,

First impressions: Your entry to "Home Sweet Home" is very appropiate to the theme; when I look at it, I can think of home, not mine, but someone's home.

Composition: The ship in the background reinforces the idea of home (coming home), as does the pink flower in the right window and the lace courtains (being home); even the satellite dish :) speaks of home (things we do at home). I very much like that you show only the top part of the house. The simple grey/black frame is appropiate to the photo.

Focus: Focus is fine.

Light: OK, the colours of the house, in particular the chimney bricks and roof tiles, are beautiful, well saturated. The background, by contrast, is a bit washed out, especially the blues, (it must have been a hazy day?), and that hurts your picture. I don't know what post-processing software you have, but you probably could improve the image using one of the various tools available for contrast or colour improvement.

I hope this helps. I very much like the glowing light in your "Cloud-scape" picture - it's beautiful! Take care,

Ursula (uabresch)
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My Heart Is Bleeding
by Mona

Comment by qachyk:
Eep. Poor tree. please tell me you didn't massacre this tree...

The sap idea is sound but it looks kind of dry.

My Heart Is Bleeding
by Mona

Comment by inspzil:
This isn't portrayed really well from this far back. In order for we dumb viewers to understand this photo, it should've been shot much closer or at least cropped closer. It's that or I'm missing the point completely which is entirely possible. Are we looking for the sap?

My Heart Is Bleeding
by Mona

Comment by f-32:
Good shot. Makes my blood boil - what kind of selfish schuck would maim a perfectly innocent tree in this manner? Initials, a little heart is thoughtless: this is desacration.

My Heart Is Bleeding
by Mona

Comment by sagestudio:
Oh, I hope you didn't do this. Nice idea, and lovely composition.

My Heart Is Bleeding
by Mona

Comment by autool:
Nice use of imagination. Good composition. 6

My Heart Is Bleeding
by Mona

Comment by jerrft:
where's the blood?

My Heart Is Bleeding
by Mona

Comment by lordrich:
It's a nice picture, just not for the challenge

My Heart Is Bleeding
by Mona

Comment by peter_k:
Not another sappy love story?

My Heart Is Bleeding
by Mona

Comment by sherryk471:
The title is the only think that says liquid here to me. I sincerely hope you didn't do this to the tree to get this photo.