bits of grass, pieces of a window
by moviealien

Comment by s4nd3r99:
nice window color

beach umbrellas
by moviealien

Comment by jah_luv:
Great job! The colors do seem to be a bit washed out, needing some processing to saturate it a bit more. Just a bit. I also think that I'd remove the people, and just leave the umbrellas, but that's for advanced editing. The horizon doesn't seem to be very straight in this either, tipping a bit to the right. I do like the shot, and you met the challenge's theme perfectly. I just can't score it as highly as I'd like.

beach umbrellas
by moviealien

Comment by krnlzbth:
a little bit on the gray or muddy side. i guess because it was overcast. the subject matter, to me, calls for brighter light. seems sad and dreary. maybe a different title would have changed the comment.

beach umbrellas
by moviealien

Comment by cloudsme:
Very good composition. I think it is a bit flat. Did you try photoshop levels, curves, and hue/saturation? Would make this an excellent photo. 6

beach umbrellas
by moviealien

Comment by SDW:
Contrast low and the horizon not level. The subject does not stand out enough. I wish you well in the challenge.

beach umbrellas
by moviealien

Comment by DemonLlama:
Great shot but a little bump in color saturation would have really made this pop

beach umbrellas
by moviealien

Comment by hideout:
Great line-up, wish this was brighter.

beach umbrellas
by moviealien

Comment by Shrink:
interesting composition. 5 umbrellas amybe could have increased the saturation to intensify the colors, Dont you hate the trashcans?

beach umbrellas
by moviealien

Comment by Nuzzer:
I'd like to see this with the colours bumped up a bit

beach umbrellas
by moviealien

Comment by naplesmusc:
I like the composition, framing. colors are a little flat. 6