Continuum Rift
by levyj413

Comment by bassbone:
Strong entry - excellent use of high contrast - the discordant shapes, the spray of light in the lower right, the deep rich blacks - it all creates a wonderful abstract - 7

Serenity
by levyj413

Comment by Jutilda:
Very Zen. Artful. I like it. Great minimalism.

Tenacious
by levyj413

Comment by bvy:
Composed like the genius that you are. I love the placement of the line. Great contrasts and textures here too.

SNA_0246.jpg
by levyj413

Comment by bvy:
Well composed with good detail. Maybe a bit more saturation? Good use of thirds.

Batter Up!
by levyj413

Comment by bvy:
I'm a sucker for shots like this. I like that amidst its abrstractedness (is that a word?) it retains recognizable baseball colors. It's got some interesting radial geometry also.

Serenity
by levyj413

Comment by EBJones:
Very uh. . . serene. But you knew that. :)

I like the minimalist nature of this shot, and you did a great job capturing the detail on the leaf.

Serenity
by levyj413

Comment by dragonballzfsr:
second twig is unnecessary , specially when u title it serenity i would have liked all free space. hope this ends high . love the calmness here

Serenity
by levyj413

Comment by the99:
very nice

Generation Calculation
by levyj413

Comment by ambaker:
Critique Club Review:

Color Saturation and Hue: Color choices are excellent, especially the play on blue and yellow making green. Saturation is good, could even go a bit more on the shirts. Hues are accurate as evidenced in the skin tones.

Brightness and contrast: Nothing is overly bright, highlights are not blown out. (the math signs are very bright though, more on that later) I like the dark black of the background. As you have already noted,the lighting is a little bit harsh. But you can work with what you have at hand. Reading your comments, it appears you were quite creative with the limited resources.

Focus and depth of field: Focus is good, but seems like it could be a tiny bit sharper. Depth of field is very good.

I would have liked this a little better with a wider crop on the left, as she is cut off by the edge of the image. The girls blue shirt seems to have some sort of processing effect along the lower edge. (Doesn't look like shadow.) I think also choosing a different color for the math symbols might have worked a bit better. The biggest issue for me, is that the equals sign is so bright and so strong that it keeps drawing the eye to the dark area in the middle of the photo.

I like that their son is covering his face. It adds a touch of humor to the image, and fits in well with the broad smiles of his parents.

All in all a cute, humerous photo.

Continuum Rift
by levyj413

Comment by xodiak:
Really nicely done! You've done well in creating an abstract WITH something to draw the eye to. The very sharp focus you managed really helps create a clean look to your image.