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Comment by SandyP:
Very nice, Jeffrey! The sparkling chandeliers give this a little more punch than just normal staircase or rotunda shots.

Time Burns Futures Into the Past
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Comment by bmartuch:
Cool shot Jeffrey. I think it would be neat with a little saturation boost. JMO

Seriously Six
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Comment by whiteroom:
seriously good.

Seriously Six
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Comment by Ivory:
Beautiful face, love the crop and the serious expression. 9

Seriously Six
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Comment by Jutilda:
I love this. It's plain simple and really good. I like her non-expression. Great freckles.

Seriously Six
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Comment by Emerkaza:
Gorgeous child-nicely done! 8

Curvy Parking Deck (Color)
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Comment by bmartuch:
This is a really neat looking shot. This would have been fantastic for the "Pattern" challenge. I like this much better than the B&W version.

Mind Travel
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Comment by Judi:
Hi, Greetings from the Critique Club:

Composition: I had to work this to show you what I mean. I am glad you were inspired by another photographer...but there are some areas that have let you down. There is way too much vacant space. It is good to have vacant space...but I can still see some detail in it...and that just confuses and then loses the viewer. I know the image that inspired you had books...but it was also taken at a different angle. Please see my version below. This could have been better if I had worked on the large version...but it is just to give you an idea.

Technical: As you can see I have darkened the book area some more to alleviate the distraction...and the image becomes more peaceful, more relaxing. The chair seems welcoming. I also touched the Hue/Saturation and Brightness/Contrast.

Overall: I think you were on the right track...you wanted an old feel to the image and yet to be inviting and calming. You did that but you were lost with a few of the details. Watch your details in the future and you will find the image you are looking for.

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Comment by magnus:
Okay, so a spiral is obviously not a circle, but this is still a very good photo with great composition

Day 30: Netherlands Carillon
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Comment by KarenNfld:
Beautiful sky, a lovely photo. I've enjoyed all of your photos, glad you finished it up!