Kite Attack!!
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Comment by wewillexplore:
Negative space should have a purpose. This is negative space for the sake of the challenge. I wish I could see those leading lines more. Use red string or something.

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Comment by JPR:
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Comment by Turbotech:
This is an intresting shot. Personal oppinion says that it lacks Wow factor, but I think my entry does as well. Composition here is good. Thinking about a polorizer for the sky but I am not sure it would workdue to the high clouds that seem to cause the illusion of a haze.

John (TurboTech)

Kite Attack!!
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Comment by amsmyth:
great shot and it carries the humor well

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Comment by gisele:
i just love this !

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Comment by hortopth:
I love it. maybe a bit better up further into the corner? He's looking down toward the bottom left, so his eyes might go better further to the upper right. (just a tiny bit). 7

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Comment by chalcone:
Nice. The faint kite thread however is neither here nor there. I'd rather have it completely disappear, or made completely obvious.

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Comment by dsidwell:
These fighting kites are so fun. I've only done kite fighting a few times, but what a great time. The photo is nice, too. I'd like to see more contrast perhaps to see that kite pop from the gray of the clouds--darker darks, lighter lights perhaps? neg. space is used very well here to orient the kite in its environment.

Black and White
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Comment by OneSweetSin:
*Critique Club*

Very nice take on the challenge, I like the several different contrasts of ideas going here. Your focus seems good, the dof works here you might have been hurt though by the shadow created by your diagonally placed oreo, makes the oreos in the stack slightly shadowed.

Only thing you are missing here is the contrast of big and small...in cause you have no little kids around yes oreos now come in mini sizes too. =o)

Overall this is a really nice image. Nicely done.

Anna

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Comment by bosie:
haha great man
could be done by a dslr as well :D
i always like the work of sony-men :D