stationary and bicycle
by zarzo

Comment by Kemptonreporter:
There's something about the beach sand which puts me off this photo.
The detail is distracting.

downward crawl
by zarzo

Comment by kat75:
I bet he's happy! They're the perfect shade for each other :) Good job!

downward crawl
by zarzo

Comment by Mambe:
I think you could have scored higher with a better lighting , I imagine this shot without the spot light on the apple , could have been really nice.

I like the composition , the contrast between the brown and green works great.

downward crawl
by zarzo

Comment by graphicfunk:
Glad I did not get this apple.

downward crawl
by zarzo

Comment by hopnjohn:
Nice composition. The only thing that detracts is the lighting.

downward crawl
by zarzo

Comment by scrum8:
The sun was a bt harsh in one spot, but nice composition.

downward crawl
by zarzo

Comment by Zoomdak:
Nice! Love the contrast of the dark shadow and the catepillar.

"Eleanor Rigby"
by zarzo

Comment by Jutilda:
I felt this should have had a much higher placement. I really like it.

"Eleanor Rigby"
by zarzo

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*

Well, you didn't find any of the negative comments helpful, so I'm not really sure what you wanted when asking for this critique, since I'm not going to just say 'good job'.
I have to agree with the people who are saying that this is a stretch on the challenge. I mean, she's a girl, and she's lonely, but the photo doesn't really follow the song to me. Is this a subway?
That being said, I do think this is a good image though. The crispness of the girl is good, nice focus there. I also like the motion blur in the background. That works well.
I like the black and white treatment, it makes the photo seem older
The composition is also very nice. I like the beam on the left, with the girl on the left, and the negative space to the right. It's almost mysterious. There seems to be a story behind the photo, not sure what that story is, but the photo definately draws me in and makes me wonder.
Overall, I think it's an excellent photo, but a stretch on the challenge.
~Heather~

downward crawl
by zarzo

Comment by sherpet:
Creepy crawley.....Nice composition here...