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Comment by Nald:
I'm thinking this shot would work well in B/W. Colors are too distracting IMHO.

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Comment by Dr.Confuser:
I am sure you would disagree or you wouldn't have entered the photo in this challenge, but IMO DNMC.

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Comment by Judi:
Nice array of pens.

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Comment by Gracechild7:
Very heavily center weighted. I might have tried moving the background farther away from the subject in order for it to blur a little more outside the dof, and brought the pens all completely into focus. A little more light on the pens would have helped them pop a little more as well. For this type of "stock" photography, I would encourage you too look at different office product catalogs to see how they compose images of writing instruments, etc.

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Comment by dg56:
I feel it would have been better if the whole image was in focus.

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Comment by sandabella:
Nice composition, shame the colours not a little brighter

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Comment by hotpasta:
good title

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Comment by sherpet:
Colud be a little sharper re focusing.....