My - Self - Portrait
by frozensun

Comment by connie:
Wonderful shot!!!

My - Self - Portrait
by frozensun

Comment by Gracious:
Good bg, nice coloring, good job!

Wet Flow
by frozensun

Comment by cpanaioti:
*Critique Club*

General: The colour is vivid. This is what initially catches the viewers attention. I think the focus is a little soft though. It's hard to tell where you want the viewer to concentrate their attention. The texture of the divits on the surface would have been brought out more if the focus were sharper.

Composition: A little less zoom and also positioning the dark area lower and to the right I think would help here. It just seems very crowded and too central on the vertical axis.

Exposure: Exposure seems right. The light to dark transition draws the viewer into the picture.

Impact: Impact is achieved through the vibrant red colour and the light to dark transition.


What is it? My guess is that it's a buoy attached to a fishing net (or something like that)

Good luck with future entries.

Colette

Wet Flow
by frozensun

Comment by paynekj:
An interesting abstract, but I have not scored you well because your subject is a primary colour, rather than a secondary colour.

Wet Flow
by frozensun

Comment by tuzik02:
i can't tell what it is, but it looks red to me, sorry, 1...

Wet Flow
by frozensun

Comment by kavamama:
It kind of looks primary to me?

Wet Flow
by frozensun

Comment by shadow:
isnt this RED???

Wet Flow
by frozensun

Comment by jmsetzler:
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Wet Flow
by frozensun

Comment by pollonos:
Isn´t that the primary color red? :)