Green eggs and ham! Yummy!
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Comment by stargazer05766:
Cool!! Green eggs and green ham...I love how u did this..

Grieving gelding
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Comment by khdoss:
Hi from the Critique Club

First Impression was what is that big blue line for?

Technically
It is hard to tell how good the picture is because of the blue lines.
Of what I can see it looks in focus, Lighting is off just a tad, and the hay seems to be on the green side.

Composition.. Looks okay

Meets Challenge
Yes, in the fact that there are 3 sections. I really did not see a story in the shot.

Final Thoughts.

I think all the comments tell the story here.

Best of Luck in future challenges.

Karen

Grieving gelding
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Comment by Candi20:
The background color does not suit the colors of the actual picture and acts as a distraction.

Grieving gelding
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Comment by TooCool:
I have to be totally honest, this doesn't work for me. This isn't an interesting enough shot for the effect and the blue doesn't work at all...
TC

Grieving gelding
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Comment by digitalknight:
blue? the huge spaces may be an attempt artistically, but I find the composition disjointed and hard to look at. 2

Grieving gelding
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Comment by levyj413:
Good for you for trying an unusual split, but it's not holding together for me.aAlso, the blue background is too much of the total image area.

Now, if the three pieces were of three different horses, or even two (top and bottom vs. middle), maybe it'd work better for me.

Sorry to hear he's grieving.

Grieving gelding
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Comment by jfwolpert:
the blue lines totally take away from your shot, it is not a series to me

Grieving gelding
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Comment by jmritz:
I find the blue stripes and rectangle very distracting.

Grieving gelding
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Comment by SDW:
Oh where do I start. First the border, the color and layout is very distracting to my eyes. I find my self looking at the border and feels like I trying to follow it like a maze. Your photograph is hidden by the border instead of separated by it. I really can't give you an opinion on the photograph it self because I can't concentrate on it. My best guess is that the photograph is ok. I hope you find this comment informative.

Grieving gelding
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Comment by GinaRothfels:
I like the look of the original photo - what is visible of it, that is. But splitting it up this way doesn't work for me, and especially not with that colour border.