Better Lucky Than Good
by neilmwilson

Comment by Dufus:
ahh... to dark IMO. But I like the setup 8

Better Lucky Than Good
by neilmwilson

Comment by toddhead:
Like how you used the pencil tip to draw attention to the Hol-in-One.

Better Lucky Than Good
by neilmwilson

Comment by notonline:
not sure how this represents serendipity. nice shot tho

Better Lucky Than Good
by neilmwilson

Comment by naynay9:
not enough lighting

Better Lucky Than Good
by neilmwilson

Comment by alanbataar:
It's a reasonably nice composition, but it's under exposed and flat. Also, it seems that your white balance could be adjusted (when shooting the original rather than in photoshop, which would cause the metallic highlights to blow out) so the white of the paper is fully white. I would share the opinion that having numerous items in the frame calls for a longer DOF. Good effort.

Better Lucky Than Good
by neilmwilson

Comment by KaDi:
The lack of focus on the divot fixer detracts from the overall effect. In fact, I don't think the object needs to be there at all--it makes for a busy composition without seeming to add any important information. Generally an inventive idea for the challenge.

Better Lucky Than Good
by neilmwilson

Comment by dahved:
Where's the serendipity aspect?

Better Lucky Than Good
by neilmwilson

Comment by bruski:
Good depth of field and nice composition. I really would of liked to have seen what this set up would look loke if you used a flash light or other source to paint it with light. It would have given every thing a nice soft glow. But any way, I still really like the image.

Dawn To Dusk Passion
by neilmwilson

Comment by frumoaznicul:
there is something that looks weird in the bush near the tree other than that it's a good composition.

Dawn To Dusk Passion
by neilmwilson

Comment by Tallbloke:
Nicely done...I just find his shoes distracting......but otherwise really nice picture.