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fotomann_foreverComment by mpeters: Hi from the Critique Club
Leroy, you had the chance to critique a landscape of mine, and did a fine job I might add, now its my turn :)
First impression: Not visually appealing(to me) but technically good. I vaguely remember the picture you are payed homage to.
Technically: As stated, good. You know your stuff with lighting, focus, etc. etc. Good job on the lighting gradient from lower left to upper right. IN short(s), good technicals.
Composition and subject matter: Im sure the diagonals created in this image were purposful. Water a good touch. Subject not as appealing to the general public as much as say...a flower, a child, or a solitary water drop :)
Challenge: The picture is funny, probably the reaction you wanted judging by some of your various pictures scattered around DPC. Here is where I would take comfort in your score: it was a very high scoring picture to land on the back page of a challenge! 4.798 puts a person near the middle of the pack in many challenges. So, take solace in that fact.
anyway, keep it lively!
mark
PM me with any questions.