Katie
by fotomann_forever

Comment by Kliopatra:
I like that u focased on the girl more than the sea view

Katie
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Comment by Efergoh:
great colors. That sky is killer.

Got Cheese?
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Comment by icdcash:
That is not funny!!!

Got Cheese?
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Comment by fotomann_forever:

Originally posted by Liehsc: Sorry this picture sucks, it says cheap gay porn.

Sorry, the gay porn isn't up to the standards you'd like to see.

Got Cheese?
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Comment by Liehsc:
Sorry this picture sucks, it says cheap gay porn.

Pop Art Slightly Burned
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Comment by dr rick:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Great idea. A very creative take on pop culture. But I don't really care for the execution. The composition doesn't seem balanced--it's a bit bottom-heavy. I do like the shape of the background (the negative space), but I think zooming out or moving back would have improved the composition.

The color is interesting. Burning out the blue wall to make it white is fine for the background, but the light it reflects gives a blue outline to the CD's and the lettering that I don't particularly like and a blueish cast to the toaster, which I do like. Except it doesn't really go with the brown spots. I like the texture of the dirty toaster, but not the color.

The other technical aspects (focus, exposure, etc.) are great. I especially like the glare around the metal edges, which nicely define the edges without being so bright to be distracting. And nice color on the CD's. (DVD's??)

Brandy
by fotomann_forever

Comment by purpleflutterby13:
Lovely eyes, but I wish her entire face was lit up. The shadow on her chin spoils it a bit (imo)

Brandy
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Comment by Olyuzi:
Too much dragon and along with the wide angle, distorts to become a caricature. Does your model think this is flattering? Maybe I'm wrong.

Brandy
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Comment by tmckinney:
Very nice

Brandy
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Comment by angela_packard:
very nice portrait....i really like what you have done here!!!!!