Pelican Point
by fotomann_forever

Comment by wavelength:
hey, you placed better than me. who said hot chicks always score well ;)

Plastic Porn
by fotomann_forever

Comment by rugman1969:

Originally posted by kenskid: Hmmmm not really porn (I know porn when I see it)...but a nice shot anyway.

I don't know, it's looks like pron to me, just remove the top and add a "KEN" doll!!!

Plastic Porn
by fotomann_forever

Comment by rugman1969:
OOOh, she's sexy. where do you find girls like that?? LOL
Awesome title. Still laughing!!!

Message edited by author 2007-08-07 22:34:59.

Pelican Point
by fotomann_forever

Comment by TonyUK:
like it

Time Out
by fotomann_forever

Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club,

First, let me congratulate you on entering your first challenge. Wait, this is the first of your challenge pictures I've been assigned as a member of the Critique Club. First let me start off stating the obvious, this is not what most people at DPC would consider to be a still life. Of course you knew that going in.

Now let me explain what I like about this image and what bothers me about this image. I've spent many hours of my life playing this game and I really love how the shallow depth of focus isolates the main subject yet allows for the complexity of the game to be shown. It is a long distance from one goal to the other with a lot of obstacles and I think your image shows that well. What bothers me the most is the chopping off of the players in the back of the image. It makes the image look more snapshotish then it really is. A slightly different shooting angle or a different arrangement of the men would have been a bit more artistically pleasing to me. This is only my opinion, your mileage may vary.

Thank you for including the lighting details in your comment section. I like the effect on the men and yet minimized the glare on the steel bars. Lighting is one thing I really want to start playing around with and I will add this set up to my list to try.

Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions regarding this critique. Now that you have your feet wet, keep entering challenges. I look forward to seeing your next entry.

Tim

The Rise of the Brighton Surf
by fotomann_forever

Comment by jaymody:
The presence of surf would have made an excellent picture

Pelican Point
by fotomann_forever

Comment by psart:
Good pelican shot like positioning of bird pole he appears to be looking right into your lens as well. Gave you a 7 psart

Pelican Point
by fotomann_forever

Comment by bubeltrubel:
very nice captured. Nice and clarity shot!

The Rise of the Brighton Surf
by fotomann_forever

Comment by coronamv:
Is this photo the same as //member.onemodelplace.com/member.cfm?ID=268225 Just curious if your located in alabama? thanks

Pelican Point
by fotomann_forever

Comment by BHuseman:
I would like this more it the horizon wasn't chopping the neck off of this poor pelican, and if the pelican were moved about 1/2" to the right. To close to his tail and too much free space to his right. 6.