Dart shadow :/
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Comment by Tygerr:
Nice idea. Creates an interesting subject. The texture of the wall is a bit distracting though - maybe some direct lighting or shallower DOF to de-emphasise it?

Dart shadow :/
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Comment by idnic:
Minimalism, yes. But.... a bit uninteresting.

Dart shadow :/
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Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Very simple - Very nice.

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Comment by ambaker:
Critique Club Review:

Exposure, color, saturation, hue, and contrast are all good. Focus and depth of field, are a bit soft. Were you going for a soft focus effect. A smaller f-stop will get you more depth of field. The area in best focus appears to be just inside the door, near the base of the plant. From there it gets softer especially as you rise up the walls.

This challenge has proven a bit difficult to critique because the challenge was understood in so many different ways by different people.

Without having seen your other pictures, I think that a picture with the door open, and without people, might have worked a bit better.

What you've done is create competing elements that vie for the title of subject. A photo that guides the eye around the frame, so as to become and endless loop, might be a better idea.

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Comment by crewmnd:
Like the perspective, the elbow of the first person walking out the door just keeps catching my eye though

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Comment by raish:
'Decomposition' might have worked, too. A composition it is though. 7

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Comment by EricMGB1974:
Excellent shot. I've commented on some of the others that I thought putting a person in the shot had created a subject, but I think you've actually managed to do that here without making him the subject. Impressive job.

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Comment by Melethia:
Something about this one I really like but I'll be darned if I can explain it.

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Comment by BeckyT:
Great idea but I think it would work better if everything was in focus.

Spider
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Comment by Gunnsi:
Good use of rule of thirds, good looking subject, soft focus good.
Everything good but the score!