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| 09/09/2006 07:14:39 PM |
Compositionby FocusPointComment by ambaker: Critique Club Review:
Exposure, color, saturation, hue, and contrast are all good. Focus and depth of field, are a bit soft. Were you going for a soft focus effect. A smaller f-stop will get you more depth of field. The area in best focus appears to be just inside the door, near the base of the plant. From there it gets softer especially as you rise up the walls.
This challenge has proven a bit difficult to critique because the challenge was understood in so many different ways by different people.
Without having seen your other pictures, I think that a picture with the door open, and without people, might have worked a bit better.
What you've done is create competing elements that vie for the title of subject. A photo that guides the eye around the frame, so as to become and endless loop, might be a better idea. |
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| 09/03/2006 11:15:04 PM |
Compositionby FocusPointComment by crewmnd: Like the perspective, the elbow of the first person walking out the door just keeps catching my eye though |
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| 09/02/2006 11:31:13 AM |
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| 09/02/2006 08:45:34 AM |
Compositionby FocusPointComment by EricMGB1974: Excellent shot. I've commented on some of the others that I thought putting a person in the shot had created a subject, but I think you've actually managed to do that here without making him the subject. Impressive job. |
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| 09/01/2006 09:40:43 PM |
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| 08/30/2006 10:34:44 PM |
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| 08/30/2006 05:11:04 AM |
Spiderby FocusPointComment by Gunnsi: Good use of rule of thirds, good looking subject, soft focus good.
Everything good but the score! |
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| 08/28/2006 10:05:02 PM |
Spiderby FocusPointComment by BeckyT: I am not a big fan of spiders but I will have to say you have met the challenge. Nice shot, even if it is a spider. |
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| 08/28/2006 02:55:53 AM |
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| 08/27/2006 08:23:23 PM |
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