UMMMM....Liquid Sugar
by Roseytone

Comment by qachyk:
Very ad-like photo, particularly given the stainless steel underneath which is very commercial-kitchen looking. Meets the challenge.

UMMMM....Liquid Sugar
by Roseytone

Comment by hawkida:
Distracting background

UMMMM....Liquid Sugar
by Roseytone

Comment by Koriyama:
I think that the colander interrupts the balance of the composition too much.

Matrix - Day Off
by Roseytone

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Roseytone...

Compositionally, I think this image is pretty strong. I always seem to like diagonals. Lines that lead my eye horizontally and vertically in a photo seem to be boring :)

The lighting on the image is a bit harsh. All the textures are visible, but there could probably be an enhancement to this with some amount of diffusion of your light source.

The focus is too soft as well. Based on the camera you are using, I would assume that you are simply too close to the subject or you have used a little too much zoom for the particular distance to subject. I feel that a shot like this should be crisply in focus. There is no realy reason for a soft focus here.

Attention to detail in a shot like this is important also. If you are going to take the time to setup a nice composition and provide interesting lighting, don't let little things like dust on your subject be a 'leftover' :)

Cheers :)

John Setzler

Matrix - Day Off
by Roseytone

Comment by thatguy:
interesting macro, i like the composition of this image, also the background was a good choice, nice work 5

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Comment by Amiee:
Good idea. I like the lighting and layout of this image. good jobl.

Matrix - Day Off
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Comment by Dustin:
good job. nice pic.

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Comment by zeuszen:
Who says titles aren't important?

Matrix - Day Off
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Comment by GreggeN:
GREAT focus ;)

Matrix - Day Off
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Comment by Anewbe4u:
At last, a different pair of sunglasses :) I like the background. A nice photo.