#6
by breadfan35

Comment by shalrath:
The DOF is wonderful here, as with the sharpness, of course. But that's expected from that marvellous lens!

#6
by breadfan35

Comment by TCGuru:
Composition: Fantastic leading lines. I am drawn right to her every time.

Lighting/Exposure: GREAT DOF choice! I rather light the light.

Pose: She looks like she is watching for something or someone. Her expression fits well.

Suggestions for Improvements: A removal of the bright spot in the top left corner. Either with a crop or a burning of the highlights.

I like the cool colouring you have going on here. It's very emotive. Makes it feel a bit sad.

#5
by breadfan35

Comment by TCGuru:
Composition: Very nicely balanced with what we can make out well and what is not so clear.

Lighting/Exposure: Wonderful.

Pose: I really like the hand on the glass. Makes it seem like you are trying to communicate.

Suggestions for Improvements: None.

This is a very cool image. I think it would have done well in the transparency challenge! :)

#6
by breadfan35

Comment by onesaint:
sweet! the lighting is great, as well as the B&W. Her eye pulls you in and completion is smooth yet textured. Nice work.

#6
by breadfan35

Comment by photokariangel:
beautufiul window light, adn the blue tint is just gorgous. well done! (i have a certain love for window shots too)

#6
by breadfan35

Comment by Jutilda:
I really like this a lot. The DOF, the light, the contrast and that hint of blue. NICE.

#4
by breadfan35

Comment by TCGuru:
Composition: I love the negative space. Beautiful!

Lighting/Exposure: Perfect. Those catchlights are really beautiful.

Pose: Loving the head tilt. Perfect.

Suggestions for Improvements: None.

This is such a lovely portrait. I really feel a great connection with the subject. Very nicely done.

#5
by breadfan35

Comment by shalrath:
Cool feeling here, abstract portraiture... different.

#5
by breadfan35

Comment by Jutilda:
This is real avant garde. I like it a lot. :~)

#5
by breadfan35

Comment by photokariangel:
awesome, i love how its like your in another world, and reaching out towards us. the colors are so strong and interesting contrasting wise as well.