Tulips during Nightby
Frank_berlinComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club. Thank you for the opportunity to criqitue your your first entry.
First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting shot .. a little much to focus on ...
Composition:
As mentioned there is a little much to focus on .. if you could have focused on a smaller area or on one or two of the tulips this would have created a more interesting and speicific image, but also created the focus point.
Subject:
Meets the challenge .. and does so very well ...
Technical (Colour and light):
I think that the comments you have received is good .. and me giving you more will confuse the issue ... take note that the comments are really good on this.
To grow its vote?:
Take a look at the other shots in the challenge .. and learn from them ... but also have a look aroudn at a few of the portfolios ... and try to learn from what they are doing.
Summary:
What a great first shot .. I remember mine ... not that long along ... a branch ... we all learn and this is a great place to do it.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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