Morning Glories
by Shea927

Comment by talj:
IMHO the lighting is harsh particularly on the centre of the flowers and the B/G flower and empty space are distracting (MHO)

DX6490
by Shea927

Comment by GoodEnd:
There is good idea to the shot. But the camera itself is a bit out of focus.

DX6490
by Shea927

Comment by pminne:
seems out of focus.

Pears
by Shea927

Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club.

I like your subject choice for this challenge and gave you a 6 on this image because I thought the subject met the challenge and you executed your idea well. The only suggestion I have to improve this image is to try using a square crop to eliminate some of the dead space at the top of the image. As presented, the section of tree branch without any fruit and the section of sky without clouds at the top of the photo act as negative space with no real purpose. I would suggest cropping the top of the image down to just below the node where the branch holding the top pear meets the main branch. Give it a try and see how this changes the balance of the image.

PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.

Tim

Message edited by author 2006-08-22 07:40:35.

DX6490
by Shea927

Comment by sjturner:
A tad out of focus

DX6490
by Shea927

Comment by scotthadl:
too soft.

DX6490
by Shea927

Comment by Majanka:
Bit out of focus...

DX6490
by Shea927

Comment by rami:
soft.. nice composition though

DX6490
by Shea927

Comment by muckpond:
out of focus.

Pears
by Shea927

Comment by Balko:
0-2 Meets Challenge: 2
0-2 Creativity: 2
0-2 Technical Merit: 2
0-2 Visual Appeal: 1
0-1 Presentation: 1
0-1 Biased WOW Factor: 0