Elecitic Personality
by theyetifanclub

Comment by Lerin:
i like this but i think id like it more if her face was more in focus and her legs didnt completley dissapear into the background

Elecitic Personality
by theyetifanclub

Comment by glad2badad:
Good use of tone to create the effect you have with the background blending with her pants (I'll need to view at home on calibrated monitor). Her placement in this gives a sense of motion, like she's walking out of the image. To me that's a good thing in this scenario, although many will argue that your subject should have space to "move into". Good luck in the challenge.

Elecitic Personality
by theyetifanclub

Comment by Photonurd:
I like! Maybe a little sharper focus?

Elecitic Personality
by theyetifanclub

Comment by Blackbox:
It's a very nice photo but the model looks anything but having an 'electric personality'. imho, she looks like she's bored to tears even though she is holding an electric guitar.

Elecitic Personality
by theyetifanclub

Comment by carlo:
Very nice, but half the subject is a little out of focus. You may of dont this on purpose to give the electric guitar the focal point. But I would have prefered all in focus. Why did you chop the top of the guitar off?

Elecitic Personality
by theyetifanclub

Comment by svstoltz:
There is another image of a bored rock musician in this challenge. They both seem unplugged.

Elecitic Personality
by theyetifanclub

Comment by romysree:
cool one

Elecitic Personality
by theyetifanclub

Comment by sevilduvarci:
i like the use of negative space.

Elecitic Personality
by theyetifanclub

Comment by zaflabout:
i would have liked to see a better focus on the model.

Elecitic Personality
by theyetifanclub

Comment by Alain:
Elecitic? Is that a word?

BTW, good picture that fits well in the challenge.