Arrgh!... I hate this!
by alexjack

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Starting with a string idea like this you can't go too wrong and your score shows that's the case.

Composition: The composition is good and the way your wife is bending over the toilet like that helps all the lines in the image point towards the bowl. There is a "thing" poking into the frame on the left that you should have moved if it is something that can be moved.

Technical: The B&W conversion is good. The border works well. The lighting is a bit harsh, especially on the cleaning products above the loo. That's really the only major criticism I can find.

Feeling: Here's where the fun comes in. The expression on your wife's face is classic for the image. The duck, well who doesn't like a rubber duck - why he's in the loo I don't want to know! The paper is a good touch too!

PM me if you have any questions.

Mueblador de Mexico
by alexjack

Comment by Bud:
Excellent - I love the interplay of the guy doing the work - If I could see his face, it would have been a 10.

Mueblador de Mexico
by alexjack

Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Love the textured wall behind.

Under the Weather
by alexjack

Comment by JLC:
Does it still run? Lots of good color contrasts!

Under the Weather
by alexjack

Comment by Gabriel:
A bit oversharpened.

Arrgh!... I hate this!
by alexjack

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Great job! Love your wife's expression! Congrats on a top ten!

Under the Weather
by alexjack

Comment by drake217:
frigid.......

Under the Weather
by alexjack

Comment by OrionThe Hunter:
To Tight of frame ..... back up or zoom out ...some.

Under the Weather
by alexjack

Comment by Blackbox:
Looks like a tad too much contrast for my liking - or rather - the truck looks really cool. I've been accused of overprocessing too and I think your subject might have looked better in a more natural state. Nice find...burr too! 7

Under the Weather
by alexjack

Comment by mcrochip:
Feels blown out to me, but the focus is good.